Savana @ Elm Park School
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Tuesday, June 26, 2018
Thursday, April 5, 2018
Summarising
We have been learning to summarise by finding the main idea in a text. I enjoyed finding the main idea by looking for clues. The diagram above shows the clues for the main idea. Next I would like to summarise a longer text.
Mystery Letter
91 Banana road
fruit valley
0000
Dear mum and dad,
I can smell coconut and dogs. I can smell shampoo and conditioner on all the dogs. It Looks like a paradise. it looks like green nature and black and white birds. I can see a tree with bumpy wood, green and brown leaves, branches and snapped sticks and twigs. I can see the sea with some fish. I feel safe, quiet, calm and happy. I hear monkeys talking and water splashing.
Where am I?
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Reflection:
We have been learning to describe a setting by using our senses. I enjoyed writing about what I sensed. I found it tricky to find the right words to describe. Next I will start my sentences differently.
I can smell coconut and dogs. I can smell shampoo and conditioner on all the dogs. It Looks like a paradise. it looks like green nature and black and white birds. I can see a tree with bumpy wood, green and brown leaves, branches and snapped sticks and twigs. I can see the sea with some fish. I feel safe, quiet, calm and happy. I hear monkeys talking and water splashing.
Where am I?
________________________________________________________________________________
Reflection:
We have been learning to describe a setting by using our senses. I enjoyed writing about what I sensed. I found it tricky to find the right words to describe. Next I will start my sentences differently.
Wednesday, April 4, 2018
Thursday, March 29, 2018
Mokomoko Facts
Friday, February 9, 2018
Monday, December 4, 2017
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