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Dear mum and dad,
I can smell coconut and dogs. I can smell shampoo and conditioner on all the dogs. It Looks like a paradise. it looks like green nature and black and white birds. I can see a tree with bumpy wood, green and brown leaves, branches and snapped sticks and twigs. I can see the sea with some fish. I feel safe, quiet, calm and happy. I hear monkeys talking and water splashing.
Where am I?
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Reflection:
We have been learning to describe a setting by using our senses. I enjoyed writing about what I sensed. I found it tricky to find the right words to describe. Next I will start my sentences differently.
I can smell coconut and dogs. I can smell shampoo and conditioner on all the dogs. It Looks like a paradise. it looks like green nature and black and white birds. I can see a tree with bumpy wood, green and brown leaves, branches and snapped sticks and twigs. I can see the sea with some fish. I feel safe, quiet, calm and happy. I hear monkeys talking and water splashing.
Where am I?
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Reflection:
We have been learning to describe a setting by using our senses. I enjoyed writing about what I sensed. I found it tricky to find the right words to describe. Next I will start my sentences differently.
1 comment:
You have used many adjectives to describe! We will work on starting our sentences in different ways.
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